Hi my name is Tyson, I go to Pt England School. My teacher is amazing Miss West. I like your story and I like your drawing. I like your detailed sun and your detailed writing. Your house is amazing in your story. Please visit my blog spot at http://pestysonm.blogspot.co.nz/ .
Kia ora Kahu, my name is Caleb and I’m in intermediate here at Taipa. I liked how you read your own story it sounded great. I liked your drawing in the background it matches your story. Maybe you could work on spelling the whole word maybe by the help of a teacher.
Kia ora my name is Keelan and i'm in intermediate. Wow its amazing to see how much you know about meteors. I think that you will learn lots and lots in the future. Maybe if you learned to tell it by yourself it we be way cooler.
What a very cool picture you drew . I did love hearing you read your story by yourself. You are a fabulous writer.
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Hi my name is Tyson, I go to Pt England School. My teacher is amazing Miss West. I like your story and I like your drawing. I like your detailed sun and your detailed writing. Your house is amazing in your story. Please visit my blog spot at http://pestysonm.blogspot.co.nz/ .
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kahu, my name is Caleb and I’m in intermediate here at Taipa.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you read your own story it sounded great.
I liked your drawing in the background it matches your story.
Maybe you could work on spelling the whole word maybe by the help of a teacher.
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Keelan and i'm in intermediate.
Wow its amazing to see how much you know about meteors.
I think that you will learn lots and lots in the future.
Maybe if you learned to tell it by yourself it we be way cooler.